Subject: Re: prompt
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Posted on: 2017-12-20 21:52:00 UTC

I like how you play with the alien languages here, both in the physical pronunciation, and in how the translator attempts to present figures of speech from it. I also like that the pre-existing conflict between the two agents isn't spelled out right away, but sets the mood throughout the whole piece nonetheless.

I could have done with physical descriptions of both agents, since neither seems human, and I don't know what they're from.

—doctorlit, going to review all of these, hopefully

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