Subject: Why not?
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Posted on: 2012-10-04 14:08:00 UTC

"Hi," said Bob.

"Hi there," Joe said back.

"Nice day."

"Yup."

I think we'd agree that those four lines deserve four paragraphs. Why not yours (which are already a lot more interesting than mine)? Not because the paragraphs wouldn't be long enough...?

Here's the thing that first put me on to this: http://ookamikasumi.deviantart.com/art/The-Secret-to-Paragraphing-152484151

There's a bit in there about not fearing the white space.

That said, the writer is coming at it from the perspective of what's expected in published, printed works, where shorter lines don't seem quite so small as they do on a big browser page. I figure what's good for published authors is good for me, since I want to be one eventually, but if that's not you, or if you don't think this would improve your storytelling, then I'm not gonna force it down anyone's throat.

It has improved mine, though, I think. I have a bad habit of writing things out of order, possibly trying to be funny or clever, or something, but it's often resulted in really murky progressions that even I can't interpret long enough after the fact. Putting this into practice, along with advice about keeping things in strict chronological order as they happen/are noticed, is helping me de-murkify my writing.

~Neshomeh

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