Subject: Style choice, yes.
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Posted on: 2012-10-04 18:37:00 UTC

I feel like you're arguing in favor of fewer, really huge paragraphs, and you probably aren't. Hm.

Anyway, the logic as I understood it was more like:

Each change of speaker gets a new paragraph > Nonverbal speech (i.e. body language, gestures, throwing a punch, otherwise acting) is still speech > Each change of actor gets a new paragraph > Use as many as you need to tell a good story and no more.

The author does come off pretty confrontational in the article, but this is the disclaimer she includes in all her artist's notes:

DISCLAIMER: As with all advice, take what you can use and throw out the rest. As a multi-published author, I have been taught some fairly rigid rules on what is publishable and what is not. If my rather straight-laced (and occasionally snotty,) advice does not suit your creative style, by all means, IGNORE IT.

So there's that.

Really, it didn't make sense to me at first either, but it stuck with me, so I decided to give it a try. It turned out to be really helpful to me. For that reason, I'm recommending other people give it a try, that's all.

~Neshomeh

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