Subject: Request for commentary.
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Posted on: 2012-10-04 19:23:00 UTC

(I will not even mention your sheer cruelty in posting that link, nor the fact that my Grammar Sense will never recover)

Okay. I have just typed up the following two paragraphs:


"It's her own fault, and she'll be back soon anyway. Look, what's Mercuria to you, anyway? You barely know the girl."

I'm sort of divided over how best to split them. On the one hand, Phoebe's actions are directly caused by Liliac's statement, so I would say they belong there. On the other hand, that leaves her spoken line with no tags at all. It's perfectly clear who's speaking, so saying it needs a tag to reduce confusion is incorrect, but... thoughts?

hS

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