Subject: $0.02
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Posted on: 2012-10-04 19:35:00 UTC

(I know, right? >.
Had to fish the lines from View Source, but I'd do it like this:

"But you let her fall!" Liliac insisted.

Phoebe scowled and lengthened her stride. "It's her own fault, and she'll be back soon anyway. Look, what's Mercuria to you, anyway? You barely know the girl."

We read the story one thing after the other, so it's clear that Phoebe's reaction is caused by Lilac's words simply because one directly follows the other. That in mind, there's no reason to split Phoebe's actions from her dialogue—it's all part of her reaction, so it belongs together, IMO.

Sadly, I have to run off now. I have a train to catch. Later!

~Neshomeh

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