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The worst error was that they skated without partners. I believe Sarah mentioned that in passing right at the beginning. I considered reproducing her rant in full, but changed my mind, on the basis that it would probably be overly boring and the mission was long enough already. That jump is ridiculous and impossible, and I really feel sorry for Yuki for having to include it in his program.

Thanks for pointing out the errors!

Eventually, I hope they'll learn to get along. That's the plan, at least. Of course, what with them being Agents and stubborn, they may do thing I don't expect...

Thanks for reading and I'm very glad you liked it!

--anamia

*pokes*

Hm, fan games, eh? Maybe when you've been around a while you can produce the next PPC computer game. {= )

Also, despite what others have said, I wouldn't worry about the Spy. It's probably just someone from the Department of Intelligence.

~Neshomeh

*bathes everything in fire between muffled shouts of spyyyy!*

*Says a muffled welcome, requests medic, and hands Candescence a Cadian pattern lasgun*

Very amusing, despite the fact that all I know about Gorillaz is what I've picked up from you. ^_^; It seems to be enough to get by with, though, and you're helpful about explaining things.

But seriously, the things badficcers will try to get away with. Hammerspace lube indeed.

~Neshomeh

I know nothing about Fruits Basket, but as seems to happen so often with badfic, I didn't need to in order to see how messed up the story was. {= P

I would have liked more details about how the so-called ice dancing was messed up in the fic, though. I am personally interested, but there's also the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance, it really worked toward the end when you included that ridiculous jump. Ouch!

There are a few minor errors I spotted, but I could only find two of them again, toward the end:

1. "With both of them actively paying attention, it world could not help but react"; I assume you meant "the world could not help but react."

2. "With them exorcises, the rest should snap back." Should be "With them exorcised."

Otherwise, I found your agents really interesting. I hope they can resolve their differences. Right now there's enough bad attitude between the two of them to asphyxiate a canary.

~Neshomeh

There's lots of places in the Bible where the "children of God" are mentioned, etc., and at least one place where it's mentioned that Christians are the adopted sons (and presumably daughters) of God.

But I'm assuming that, since this is badfic, adoption wasn't in the picture...

*insert Tadkeeta's profanity-laden rant in A DIOM Fanfic here*

You know, Sues with pretentions to divinity should be thrown in the Tash.

So, if I dare ask, who's the mother? For some reason I keep getting an image of Jadis in my head, though I doubt that's it. And if Aslan is meant to be Jesus, then it follows logically that he would have no children, as Jesus had no children and watches over all men etc.

-Looks at above paragraph- Oh, wait. Logic. I forgot that 'Suefics don't use logic. -sighs- Can't wait to read this one (/end sarcasm).

--anamia

Hehe, it deserved being torn apart. Thanks for reading and glad you liked it!

--anamia

One point I though I should mention is that my agents are not assassins. They don't deal with 'Sues. (I suppose you could make the point that Yuki might be a replacement, but I considered him merely possessed by the Author Wraith and treated him accordingly.)

Thanks for reading!
--anamia

But still mistakes? I had hoped I had caught them all by now.

I have no idea what the deal is with Sues and dreamcatchers; this is the first time I saw a Sue pull one out of her pocket. Which I charged her for, seeing as she was wearing skinny jeans and one can't hold a tictac in the pocket of those without it showing.

Haha, tore the fic apart like paper. Nice way of dealing with the affected canons, too. Excellent work!

KA-BOOM!

Oh, they're gonna have to glue those Sues back together... IN HELL!

*Shades* shocking.

YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!

Oh, sorry, that was a terrible one-liner. Awesome gift, though!

Stupid typos.

I USED to work with Flash back in high school, for my first fan-game project (it was an incredibly simplistic Mega Man RPG battle engine), but I currently use a program called Construct. I'm also learning C++ at the moment, so I might use that as well to make stuff.

Also, a Razor Boomerang? Cool. I'm an Aussie, so it helps!

Thanks!

In fact, I'll try and keep it somewhere where there's less chance of someone screwing with it. Safer that way. Stars can be such fiddly things.

All of this will be handy. Thanks!

It's a very good shiny rock, though. Awesome!

I love 'em, thanks.

Don't worry.

Muhahahaha.

My favourite! How did you know?

And even then, one could just look for the lyrics online. Jeez.

And I remind myself the "preview message" button is there for a reason.