Chapter Two: Falling In Love
“Do you not know that I dream of you every night?” Eledhwen whispered.
Lori blinked and looked up at Eledhwen. “You do?” she murmured.
“Ay, tis true. You are the lady of my dreams, the fairest mortal I have ever seen…”
“Eledhwen!” came a screeching voice. It was Christianne Shieh, Eledhwen’s evil partner! “I thought you loved me!”
Eledhwen turned to face her partner. “I loved Lori more,” she replied simply.
“How dare you! You’ve broken my heart!” Christianne howled. “I’ll get back at you for this, I promise youuuuu!” And with that the spiteful Christianne stalked away.
Lori looked at Eledhwen with sparkling eyes. “You really do love me!” she cried joyously. “Oh, why have I lurked in sadness for so long? I love you too, Eledhwen!”
Eledhwen smiled and leaned in and kissed Lori on the lips.
To Be Continued…
Author’s Note: Please read and review! I hope I have them in character!
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Discovering Love, Chapter Two by
on 2009-07-10 21:36:00 UTC
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PPC: Time of Judgement by
on 2009-07-10 21:32:00 UTC
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Disclaimer: I have not played the World of Darkness games, just read the wiki about them. I also do not own the PPC, although I wish I did. I do own Lyta and Tara-Something.
PPC: Time of Judgement
Prolouge:Omens
Agent Lyta Holling walked the corridors of HQ, humming to herself. She had just become an Agent, and was eager to meet her new partner, Agent Tara-Something. She knew that like all other Agents, she was slightly insane. But hopefully, that won't pose an obstacle to her overtures of friendship. She slowed her pace in order not to bump into anyone, and in a quiet spot, she offered a libation to the Ironic Overpower in order to make sure that everything went smoothly.
She then continued on her way, and reached Agent Tara's RC. Then, it hit her: She had been keping track of where she was going, something that in the PPC, was supposed to get her lost, not the opposite. Did her libation cause all that, or was it something more ominous?
Her question was answered when she found Agent Tara dead on the floor, surrounded by a pool of blood.
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Seconded- 'ros' means 'foam'. (nm) by
on 2009-07-10 21:25:00 UTC
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Review by
on 2009-07-10 21:05:00 UTC
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Let me put it this way, MystikaLuvrrRr (and what kind of name is that?), you should never have picked up the keyboard. Learn to use spell-check, see what passes for GOOD fiction, and then maybe you can publish your work. Until then I'll thank you not to inflict your imbecilic writing on us.
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Only if you're thinking that we should make one by
on 2009-07-10 20:56:00 UTC
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But I warn you, I haven't even worked on the PPC my partner and I started a few months ago in a while.....
--Mystia, procrastinating
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Happy Birthday! by
on 2009-07-10 20:22:00 UTC
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*eats ice cream* Not silly at all. Congratulations!
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(Force of habit.) by
on 2009-07-10 20:05:00 UTC
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(Wrong name as a reviewer, sorry. Please make sure the reviewer's name is PrincessxKatricia.)
I actualy said all that, srry.
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Agent Lyseaen Kai'loie by
on 2009-07-10 19:47:00 UTC
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I am Agent Lyseaen Kai'loie of the PPC. I have a slim figure, eyes that change color (between purple and blue), and midnigt blue hair that is violet streaks. Yeh, I'm a Mary Su.
So what!?
The PPc only kills evil Sues now. All the good ones, like me, are recruited. In fact, because there aren't enough evil ones for everyone the Sunflower Oficial opened up a new Mary Sue factory to keep the agents in shape. (A/N: See, doesn't that make cense?)
Because I already have prefect fighting skills and can reade minds and have powerful magic, I only have to go out on missions. Also, I'm half-goddess so I'm immortal.
That's me.
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The console in my flower-themed R.C. went off.
[Eeeevvvviiilll Sssuuuueee Aaallleeeerrrtttt!!!}, it sang.
"Lets go", I told my silver pet dragon Silverleah.
I stepped through the pink and gold portal.
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Not that I'm aware of, no. by
on 2009-07-10 19:42:00 UTC
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At least not according to the official list.
...Are you thinking what I'm thinking?
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Sadly, no. by
on 2009-07-10 18:41:00 UTC
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I'm only in my mid-teens now. My siblings make me feel old, though.
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Discovering Love by
on 2009-07-10 18:37:00 UTC
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Genre: Romance, Rating: R, Summary: Lori Starrett vowed to never love another. But what happens when she meets Eledhwen Elerossiel? R&R please. No flames.
Discovering Love
Chapter One: The Meeting
Lori Starrett sang a happy tune as she melodically drifted down the corridors of HQ in a long forest green dress. Her sparkling auburn hair drifted in the wind and her voice was like the trilling of a thousand nightingales. Her skin was as pale as porcelain and her eyes as green as the leafy halls of Mirkwood, home of her former lover, Legolas Thranduillion.
She sighed as she remembered her former love, who had left her to go to the Grey Havens. In her sadness, a single, pearly tear slipped down her porcelain cheek . “Oh Legolas,” she sighed wistfully. “I will never love another ever again.”
(Author’s Note: Just pretend she never met Bill Fallis.)
Lori had been recruited by the PPC for her skills as a healer but instead of working at Medical she preferred to spend her days in the everwhite labs of the Department of Mary Sue Experiments and Research. There she was an excellent scientist, discovering many things about Mary Sues and adding to the PPC’s knowledge about them. She would have been the new Lab Director or even Department Head, but she modestly turned down the offer.
But now as she walked the halls, she suddenly collided with someone.
“Ouch!” an equally melodius tone exclaimed.
“Who are you?” Lori queried.
“Eledhwen Elerossiel,” the elleth replied. She had dark hair as mysterious as midnight and grey eyes like those of Legolas. “Who are you?”
“Lori Starrett.”
Eledhwen smiled. “The best scientist in HQ?”
“I don’t know.”
“You are. That’s what everyone says. And I think I’ve had quite a crush on you ever since you were recruited.”
The tears welled up. “But I cannot love another! My heart has been given to Legolas of Mirkwood, and he hath forsaken me. I shall spend the rest of my life grieving for my lost love.”
Eledhwen looked at her sadly. “My lady, my heart doth grieve for you.” She reached out and took Lori’s hand. “But I have loved you, too. Try. Try to love someone else.”
Lori bowed her head, saying nothing but feeling much.
Author’s Note: Please read and review! I hope I have Lori and Eledhwen in character!
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Badfic Game Registration by
on 2009-07-10 18:35:00 UTC
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(I'd like to join the game and mock Suethors who purposefully write Sues/Stus because they consider them "creative characters" and love them. So, here goes:)
Username: PrincessxKatricia
Bio: Hi!!! I love to write lotsof stories abuot the PPC!! The PpC is so awsome!!! And yeah, I like wrighting about Marry Sues but their my own characters so there!! I can write anything I want!!! Please review my stories!!!! No flames!!1
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happy birthday! by
on 2009-07-10 18:15:00 UTC
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May it be filled with merriment and frolicking and the like.
So how old does that make you? Past the safety line of "I can now never be a teenage mother"? Old enough to get up to all manner of things?
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RE: Sweat, Blood and Tears by
on 2009-07-10 18:10:00 UTC
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This is a great story! Except the end, where Acacia and Jay got all out of character. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Happy birthday! by
on 2009-07-10 17:16:00 UTC
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Ohhh, ice-cream... *nom nom nom*
And as you're a year older, I present you with your very own sling, a sack of pebbles, and a basket of Bleeprin-berries.
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Happy Birthday! by
on 2009-07-10 17:14:00 UTC
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*munches on your homemade ice cream* Here is a brand-new Spork Collection just for you on your birthday. Use it wisely and with care.
(augh, a welcome break from pretending to be a badfic writer. The bad grammar and spelling, it hurts! :P)
--Mystia, happy
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Awww, thats so cute! by
on 2009-07-10 17:14:00 UTC
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Im glad she found some happyness and he seemed really cute and dont think you need to apologise for no smut because some people cant write it for some fo their characeters and it was really good anyway!
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this is only ur first story? by
on 2009-07-10 17:12:00 UTC
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you are such an mazing riter! i am really jealous. i have written stories before but not as g00d as yours. please keep writing! Lilith is sucha kool haracter! an she deserves to get the best ball evar!
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Oh, wow! by
on 2009-07-10 17:12:00 UTC
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I've been looking forawrds to seeing Jaycacia again because I really think shes one of the best Assassins and I hope everything turns out all right for her cosshe deserves tobe happy after everything taht happened with Acaica.
Please writemore soon because I cant wait!