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Not saying that KHII doesn't have its problems, but… is it all tying together, or are the issues separate, or what?

Bringing the walls down? Can they target that specific world, or are other worlds likely to be exposed to an elevated risk of falling into Darkness? What'd be the likelihood they'd be restored?

See, the thing is that I'm a little suspicious of introduced deities and the like. I don't think there's really any evidence for or against, though.

Created the worlds? *had a vague impression that the KH-verse started off as just one world initially, but blow her down if she can figure how it works right now*

As far as the plots go, I'd suggest finding somewhere where they can offer assistance, but not overshadowing the people of that world- and, y'know, make sure the folks of that world know to get out of the way of any dragons that seem to be falling on top of them and that sort of thing. Their main focus would be getting rid of the Heartless, though, right?

What about the noticeability of a group of nine people, though?

Couple of livejournal communities that might be helpful, too: orgplotbunny does plotbunnies, and khbeta might offer some more feedback, as well.

For those of us who are teetering on the edge of madness and really just need to see some proper spelling for a while.

Ah... *sigh* Look around, my friends, and enjoy the peace and quiet of a lovely grassy plain with blue skies above you, a warm, gentle breeze, and lots of Bleeprin.

No, you're not dreaming. Piled high beside the Generic Red-and-White Checkered Picnic Blanket (charmed by Mr Weasley to stretch as far as we need it) is, indeed, a full supply of Bleeprin pills and all types of alcohol and chocolate you can think of.

So welcome, friends; I invite you to relax with me. Shed your FanficLand personas and let your eyes drift across well-spelled Words. Enjoy the sweet taste of chocolate and the peace and quiet of this Generic Picnic Scene.

(Really, I don't know about the rest of you, but my eyes and head really, truly HURT after reading that thread. And with all the OOC talk about how we're scaring ourselves with bad typing and third-person notes... well, there's no harm in this.)

no 1 desrves 2 b turned in2 a floower!

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!

*gives a cake with blue and red icing*

it was very funny. Unfortunately, my recipe for badfic writing is more along the lines of "force yourself not to backspace every time there's an error", with forced mistakes making up about four out of five parts. *sigh*]]

fightin an killin and mel kikcs @$$$$$$$!!!!!!!

[[OOC: Sedri is also scaring herself, and understands Ansela's need to write in third person as Sedri believes it is a form of protection for the abused, grammer-loving brains of all involved Borders.]]

thanks kawaiiichisgurl4eva for reviewign! everyone else should be like you! im glad you liked it

chapter 1

agent rebecca stepped thru the portal into rivendel (AN: is that how you spell it?) and looked around. the marysue was rite in front of her talking to legolas. rebecca lifted her sord. "princess sparkly your charged with being a marysue prepare to die!" She said.

but the marysue was to fast! she shot a bolt of litening at rebecca! rebecca dov to the ground! her sword fell from her hand to far away to reach!

suddenly the sue screamed! rebecca looked up and the sue was gone! legolas wanderd off confused. there in front of rebecca was a beautiful black Rose with gold trim on her petals and pale violet leaves. she shone in the evning sunlight.

"i am the Raven Rose" she said.

"b-but how did you do that?" rebecca asked "where did the sue go?"

"ill explain later" the Raven Rose said "take me to the so imediately"

AN: plz r + r! reviews are nice!

[[OOC: What's sad is that I used to write stories like this. Only with more apostrophes.]]

Or a banana birthday cake... if you like that. Otherwise, take your pick: Plain, chocolate, strawberry, icing-filled, sprinkle-covered, cinderella-shaped.... Well, maybe not that last one.

Ah, well. Happy birthday!

Ok u revued my stort, so now I'll revue urs!

Umm.......

ok id n't know who your agents r, r tey made-ups? Its good i guess, but teh secks and Lux in Chappie 1 was alittle wierd! NE way, I'llkeep reading if u keep writng!

XOXOX

As Acacia aimed her wand at the SO, Jay turned away from the desk and threw herself on top of Jaycacia with a sob. "Oh my beautiful darling daughter," she cried, kissing her face and lips. "I only just got you back and now you're dead!! You can't be dead, Jaycacia! I love you!" She pressed her hands to the beautiful girls' chest, feeling an intense heat from where Acacia's bolt had hit. Acacia, meanwhile, was looking on with a sneer.

"As if that means anything," she said cruelly. "I thought I loved you once, before you betrayed me. Oh, yes," she went on, "you're the reason I turned to evil - your cheating on me with Sean and Lux. But I'll never turn back, never! I'm happy to be evil!" And she laughed an evil laugh.

Turning, Jay glared at her through tear-stained eyes, clutching Jaycacia's body to her. "You don't deserve love," she said, her voice breaking. "But Jaycacia did, and now she's dead!"

And we did love her, the Sunflower Official said, his tendrils wrapping around Jay. We two, we loved her dearly. And you took her away from us. Supported by him, Jay bowed her head over Jaycacia's still form. Crystal tears slid from her eyes, splashing down onto the black stain between her breasts.

"Oh, shut up already," Acacia snapped, swinging the wand round. "That girl was a complete slut. She never loved either of you, she just used you. She deserves to be dead -- you all do!"

"But they will not be," a voice said, "not today." Ignoring Jay's astonished exclamation, Jaycacia sat up. "You may have power, but I have more, because I have known love, and you... you never have." Screaming, Acacia fired her want, but Jaycacia caught the black fire in her hand effortlessly. "Not this time, mother," she said sadly. "This time you'll lose -- permanently." The captured energy reformed itself into an ebon sword, which Jaycacia, leaping to her feet, swung at Acacia.

~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Sean? And Lux??

Acacia shrugged. "It could be worse."

Jay stared at her. "She's got me sleeping with Sean and Lux, how could it be worse?"

Acacia raised an eyebrow. "She could have you sleeping with the SO and a Mary-Sue?" she suggested. Jay glowered.

"That's not the same. I mean, this is Sean. And-"

"And Lux, yes." Acacia shook her head. "I'm amazed that's the first thing you find objectionable about that... thing, Jay."

Jay shrugged. "The rest of it's just funny, Acy. But that... ugh. Can you imagine what Lux would say?"

"... yes. In great detail." Acacia shuddered. "Never tell her about this story."

"Agreed," Jay said fervently, and sipped her coffee before turning the page.

then I would get drunk just off my own (kawaiiichisgurl4eva) 'fic' using 2, 5 and 6 alone. I'm scaring myself with how often I do all of those things.

and im sory i didnt reviw lats chappie i muts hav mist it in teh lits cuz i wuld has othawes and auror (is dat how u spel it) shuld totly b in dpartmetn off pursenel bcuz seh neds 2 b wiht teh markis and plz revew my ficcie bcuz its awsum

tahts so cole and i now taht mel and makstihngs wil kil moar sues tahn anie otha agnet acept jacasia bcuz tehyr awsum liek tahe and plz writ moar bcuz i watn 2 red it and plz reviw my ficcie bcuz its awsum and kewl liek tihs 1

[[OOC: Ansela is scaring herself now. She is finding it easier and easier to write in the above manner with each in character review that she writes. She is also wondering why she is talking about herself in the third person]]

there not talentless its a good story! didnt anyone teach you not 2 be mean to people?

[[OOC: I think we're all starting to scare ourselves.]]

[[Still OOC: I think I have some lying around somewhere.]]

Is seh goin to join the mArkeys department (I thikn its called the depratment of personal or somthing) becos thet would be realy cool. also ive herd peopl say yo should have a betta for yor wrightin, do you hav a betta? I dont know what one is but appartmently all good authers hav one.

Forgot these parts
Genre: romance
Rating: pg

Oooh, I guessed it, go me! lol I'm glad makes0things finds som lov, ppl are so mane 2 him

XOXOX

OMG!!! I totally kne it! that xplains eveything lol!

Only Hiakry can't b the best agent in the PPC beause Jakacia is akready, so mebby u should fix that!

XOXOX

(( The sad thing is that most of the slips really are slips. My recipe for badfic writing is three parts uncorrected typing to one part word replacement with optional grammar on the side. ^_^;

See, Brandy as a character isn't dumb, really. She's lazy and she has a tendency to miss the forest for the trees when it comes to canon, but she COULD improve. She just doesn't want to spend any real time on it.

~Neshomeh ))

*eyeroll*

Honestly, what do you think this is, your personal playground for your sugar-driven talentless ravings? This is a site for FANfiction, fiction written by FANs of the PPC. To be a fan, you need a working brain, QED, you are distinctly underqualified. Moron.

[[OOC: WCYC is starting to scare me.]]