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it was very funny. Unfortunately, my recipe for badfic writing is more along the lines of "force yourself not to backspace every time there's an error", with forced mistakes making up about four out of five parts. *sigh*]]

fightin an killin and mel kikcs @$$$$$$$!!!!!!!

[[OOC: Sedri is also scaring herself, and understands Ansela's need to write in third person as Sedri believes it is a form of protection for the abused, grammer-loving brains of all involved Borders.]]

thanks kawaiiichisgurl4eva for reviewign! everyone else should be like you! im glad you liked it

chapter 1

agent rebecca stepped thru the portal into rivendel (AN: is that how you spell it?) and looked around. the marysue was rite in front of her talking to legolas. rebecca lifted her sord. "princess sparkly your charged with being a marysue prepare to die!" She said.

but the marysue was to fast! she shot a bolt of litening at rebecca! rebecca dov to the ground! her sword fell from her hand to far away to reach!

suddenly the sue screamed! rebecca looked up and the sue was gone! legolas wanderd off confused. there in front of rebecca was a beautiful black Rose with gold trim on her petals and pale violet leaves. she shone in the evning sunlight.

"i am the Raven Rose" she said.

"b-but how did you do that?" rebecca asked "where did the sue go?"

"ill explain later" the Raven Rose said "take me to the so imediately"

AN: plz r + r! reviews are nice!

[[OOC: What's sad is that I used to write stories like this. Only with more apostrophes.]]

Or a banana birthday cake... if you like that. Otherwise, take your pick: Plain, chocolate, strawberry, icing-filled, sprinkle-covered, cinderella-shaped.... Well, maybe not that last one.

Ah, well. Happy birthday!

Ok u revued my stort, so now I'll revue urs!

Umm.......

ok id n't know who your agents r, r tey made-ups? Its good i guess, but teh secks and Lux in Chappie 1 was alittle wierd! NE way, I'llkeep reading if u keep writng!

XOXOX

As Acacia aimed her wand at the SO, Jay turned away from the desk and threw herself on top of Jaycacia with a sob. "Oh my beautiful darling daughter," she cried, kissing her face and lips. "I only just got you back and now you're dead!! You can't be dead, Jaycacia! I love you!" She pressed her hands to the beautiful girls' chest, feeling an intense heat from where Acacia's bolt had hit. Acacia, meanwhile, was looking on with a sneer.

"As if that means anything," she said cruelly. "I thought I loved you once, before you betrayed me. Oh, yes," she went on, "you're the reason I turned to evil - your cheating on me with Sean and Lux. But I'll never turn back, never! I'm happy to be evil!" And she laughed an evil laugh.

Turning, Jay glared at her through tear-stained eyes, clutching Jaycacia's body to her. "You don't deserve love," she said, her voice breaking. "But Jaycacia did, and now she's dead!"

And we did love her, the Sunflower Official said, his tendrils wrapping around Jay. We two, we loved her dearly. And you took her away from us. Supported by him, Jay bowed her head over Jaycacia's still form. Crystal tears slid from her eyes, splashing down onto the black stain between her breasts.

"Oh, shut up already," Acacia snapped, swinging the wand round. "That girl was a complete slut. She never loved either of you, she just used you. She deserves to be dead -- you all do!"

"But they will not be," a voice said, "not today." Ignoring Jay's astonished exclamation, Jaycacia sat up. "You may have power, but I have more, because I have known love, and you... you never have." Screaming, Acacia fired her want, but Jaycacia caught the black fire in her hand effortlessly. "Not this time, mother," she said sadly. "This time you'll lose -- permanently." The captured energy reformed itself into an ebon sword, which Jaycacia, leaping to her feet, swung at Acacia.

~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Sean? And Lux??

Acacia shrugged. "It could be worse."

Jay stared at her. "She's got me sleeping with Sean and Lux, how could it be worse?"

Acacia raised an eyebrow. "She could have you sleeping with the SO and a Mary-Sue?" she suggested. Jay glowered.

"That's not the same. I mean, this is Sean. And-"

"And Lux, yes." Acacia shook her head. "I'm amazed that's the first thing you find objectionable about that... thing, Jay."

Jay shrugged. "The rest of it's just funny, Acy. But that... ugh. Can you imagine what Lux would say?"

"... yes. In great detail." Acacia shuddered. "Never tell her about this story."

"Agreed," Jay said fervently, and sipped her coffee before turning the page.

then I would get drunk just off my own (kawaiiichisgurl4eva) 'fic' using 2, 5 and 6 alone. I'm scaring myself with how often I do all of those things.

and im sory i didnt reviw lats chappie i muts hav mist it in teh lits cuz i wuld has othawes and auror (is dat how u spel it) shuld totly b in dpartmetn off pursenel bcuz seh neds 2 b wiht teh markis and plz revew my ficcie bcuz its awsum

tahts so cole and i now taht mel and makstihngs wil kil moar sues tahn anie otha agnet acept jacasia bcuz tehyr awsum liek tahe and plz writ moar bcuz i watn 2 red it and plz reviw my ficcie bcuz its awsum and kewl liek tihs 1

[[OOC: Ansela is scaring herself now. She is finding it easier and easier to write in the above manner with each in character review that she writes. She is also wondering why she is talking about herself in the third person]]

there not talentless its a good story! didnt anyone teach you not 2 be mean to people?

[[OOC: I think we're all starting to scare ourselves.]]

[[Still OOC: I think I have some lying around somewhere.]]

Is seh goin to join the mArkeys department (I thikn its called the depratment of personal or somthing) becos thet would be realy cool. also ive herd peopl say yo should have a betta for yor wrightin, do you hav a betta? I dont know what one is but appartmently all good authers hav one.

Forgot these parts
Genre: romance
Rating: pg

Oooh, I guessed it, go me! lol I'm glad makes0things finds som lov, ppl are so mane 2 him

XOXOX

OMG!!! I totally kne it! that xplains eveything lol!

Only Hiakry can't b the best agent in the PPC beause Jakacia is akready, so mebby u should fix that!

XOXOX

(( The sad thing is that most of the slips really are slips. My recipe for badfic writing is three parts uncorrected typing to one part word replacement with optional grammar on the side. ^_^;

See, Brandy as a character isn't dumb, really. She's lazy and she has a tendency to miss the forest for the trees when it comes to canon, but she COULD improve. She just doesn't want to spend any real time on it.

~Neshomeh ))

*eyeroll*

Honestly, what do you think this is, your personal playground for your sugar-driven talentless ravings? This is a site for FANfiction, fiction written by FANs of the PPC. To be a fan, you need a working brain, QED, you are distinctly underqualified. Moron.

[[OOC: WCYC is starting to scare me.]]

One of you cretins actually got something right. The SO, as you have, I'll be generous, 'written' him, is indeed a Marty-Sam (it's not 'Garystu', moron, don't you know anything?). But that still doesn't make up for your sheer, bone-shattering ignorance in the matter of anything else.

(AN: Well, I onl got 1 revue 4 the last chappie, but tha's ok!

Ellintirya Lloysinthayr: LOL, don't worry, she's not a Sye. she's totally balanced n stuff, and Sues SUCK! Thx 4 reading!)

Teh recruit walkind in2 teh Marwuis's office an aid, "Hi, I'ma new recruit! I just joined 2day and I'm ready 2 rock!"

But the Marqis said "what are u doing in my office? I didn't know about any new recturi! Who are u?"

Ad she said, "my name is Aurora E. Lorra OMG HOw come ur so mean when i didnt do nethign 2 u?!"

And he said "None of ur bizwax, I bet u want 2 b an asssassin and for the SO right? hahaha" he laughed asdly.

And she said "Well yah, what else is there? xsept Dogga, but they're just cool bcus they get fire."

The Marwis shook like a laef (AN: haha), he was afraid of fire!

Aurora went up 2 him and asid "Aw I'm not gonne hurt u, I don't even like fire either. How come ur so sad and stuff?"

And h e said "sigh, well I guess I can tel u, u seem nice. I... im jealus of the SO! he gets everything, and not me. Hes got all the assassins ans jay and acacisa (even tho shes scary) AND Jaycacia loces him, and ismarried 2 him 2!" and he cried!

And Aurora sad "That is true, but I bet ppl would like u mroe if u werent so mane all the time." she hgged him. "Im not cool liek JAkacia or nething, but I wil help u!

"but how?" sniffed the Marwiq.

"I do knot now, but Iwill think fo sumthing!" said Aurora.

(What wil she do lool? fid nout next time! REVUS PLZ!

XOXOX)

Well, since I'm about to head to school, I can't gve a long answer. But I will once I get home. Until then, here's a link to the chapters I've written already:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4078281/1/Worlds_Apart

I should be back in a few hours. Until then, have fun!

Post CoM, meaning that it starts where KHII should. Literally, it starts as Roxas ends, and where Sora is waking up.
Travel between the worlds isn't possible, because the World Walls have been reintroduced to the Universe. Within the story, I had to have the 12 Gods destroy those walls, in order to allow the Crest Holder of Friendship to have his world taken and to meet up with the other Crest Holders, as the Crest Holder of Friendship is also capable of 'Forging' bridges between the worlds using the power of frienship. The World Highways would only be created whenever he enters new worlds, however, and as such, they need to use a Gummi Ship to get to new worlds until the CH of Friendship comes into his powers.

Within Kingdom Hearts, there's the side of the Light, and the side of Darkness. There aren't any set Gods or Deities, unless you count the ones from Olympus Coliseum. Within Worlds Apart, they are Gods for that world, and have no power over others. The 12 Big Gods were the ones who originally created the Universe, as well as the various worlds.

I'm still toyingwith the idea of Disney Castle, so I'll get back to you.

The weapons are specialised in a similar way to the Keyblade. However, instead of using the direct power of the heart, each weapon uses the power of a pure emotion which has been elevated to become very dangerous to the Heartless. Again, in my story, it is set that no-one can harm the Heartless, unless the Keyblade or Crest Weapons are nearby, as power of the Keyblad e/ CW's spread to the weapons around them for a short time.

The problem is just the plots. I don't wanna be godmodding, or anything like that.

Anyways, thanks so much for your reply, it's helping me get things set down.

i alwaiys new teher was sumtihng difrent abut him adn hes muhc coler as a stu adn i bet it was 1 of teh ohter 'flours' taht mad him 1 bcuz tehy was jeloz of him and hickory shuld fre him form his cruse so they can b 2getha 4eva and plz revew mai stroi as wel bcuz its a romacne liek tihs but wiht agnets isnted of teh so and its relly cole juts liek tihs