Subject: That was.........
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Posted on: 2016-09-20 17:20:00 UTC
.........Bloodt hilarrious, keep up the gooed work
[[*Whole hearted, subconsciousness clapping*]]
Subject: That was.........
Author:
Posted on: 2016-09-20 17:20:00 UTC
.........Bloodt hilarrious, keep up the gooed work
[[*Whole hearted, subconsciousness clapping*]]
That is, when's this year's Badfic Games?
EVERYDOBY RUNA ROUN D AND SCREAM AND SHOTU FOR GLORSIOU GLORY!
((AAAAAAAAA I SAW IT COMING BUT I'M STILL EXCITED))
Why oh why do I have to be busy with the Badfic Game on? I am sad. But I'll try to find the time to leave a review or two, maybe even continue my stories, sometime before this thread falls off the front page. *crosses fingers*
(Also, hi, Ix. I'm glad you're home and doing better. E-mail me if you want to. *optional!hug*)
~Neshomeh
Im sooooo excited for the next chaptr! Seriously you don't even know. Thanks for translating the abreviations, its really helpful to me especially.
Keep up the good work
It's so cool getting to see these characters in my favorite book! Its such a good idea. . . I wish I'd thought of it *pout* They're such cool characters, too. And the fox bit?! Is Tacitus a kitsune?! that would explain why he's so freaking cool ^.^ super looking forward to the nxt chapter!!!
Woohoo I love poke-shipping! And shipping in general I just like reading relationships and seeing there developement.
Lookin forward to the next chapter, hope the geth gets to joyn in on the funz ;)
I still love it even if I'm not writing this story anymore. And I'll pass the geth thing on to my friend!! I can't wait to see what she does
I'm totally into shipping but idk... My brains kind of more in Aus this year. I'm hoping I can put one together before to long..... I miss posting stories that I write!!
Thanks 4 reviewing!!
~~DW***
Who is this Miss Steele who szddenly pops up? Otherwise, its a really good story do far.
((XD you caught it! Fantastic :) I left it in on purpose, though whether it ever has any impact on the story... wait and see. :) But I should have known you'd be the one to spot the lone Miss Steele! ~DF))
This is amazing! More! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please, pretty please, more!
((...glance at it again before posting to see if there's anything I can add--that's what happened last time. Apart from that, though, it's done! Hope y'all are and will continue to be, uh, enjoying...
~DF))
This is probably the best-spelled parody story about a human and a mute Zorua I'll ever read. Also, I don't think anyone's ever typed that sentence before, so bonus points for that. XD
...Seriously, this is a parody, right? I mean, I'm all for inclusivity and non-hetero relationships, but at this point the title has some connotations I really don't like thinking about when one of the main characters isn't human.
Anyway, nice writing, the idea of the Inner Monologue being vaguely separate is cool, you do you, have a great day. :)
If your really all for inclusivity, you wouldn't automatically assume it's a parody. Who cares if one of them isn't strictly human? They're both sentient and sapient so they are both capable of giving consent so they can live their lives however they want!!! And anyway it's just a story. Even if they weren't capable, no one would get hurt; it's just fantasy. There is no need for you to be so judgementall about what is just a story.
(And the idea of separating out bits of her subconscious to talk is actally canon, so it's kind of a shallow thing to compliment.)
iff yu had reed Prize Mission you wuold know FOOL WELL taht Gasparde is a grill.
Aslo Argent Suicide was tehre too.
I'm not CIS, I'm personally more of an Republic guy. Though the CIS did have some pretty cool battle droids—
What? Isn't this about Star Wars? You know, the Confederacy of Independent Systems? No?
im ur bigest fan, gassie!
*Gloomps*
gassiiiiiiiiiiie!!
but flauwed.
Mi prublem was taht the socks werre tooo dirty! How acn i relatete wit a caracter with dirty socks?
Berry goot, overwise (Monologue is soooo hotttt!!!!)
TDLRDT, clean ur socks.
Seriously I searched teh while thing and I couldn't find any. But yeah, you looking the monologue is awesome!! Doesn't he make an awesome ~~ subconscious??
Ty for reviewing!!! Hope u like how it keeps going!!
~~DW**~
T'subconscious was astoundin', lass, I jus' cannae help but b'drawn t'the severe overloadin' of dirty socks - an' as much as I love it, I cannae find a connection wit' a dirty-socked lad, as you wrote.
Fanfic Land is open? I've been waiting, like, forever! Here's the first fic I wrote for it! :P
Let's see whatcha think!
((Please, please, if anybody has any of that stuff that lets you check where this was posted from, I'm begging you, don't. I'd be using an alternate computer, but I seriously don't have anything to do it with.))
It works for me. But, if it's not working for you guys, let's try this again.
And just in case that doesn't work, here's it again! Open Says-a Me!
...And half the dialogue is in capslock. Yay. -_- Sorry, the only place shouty dialogue is acceptable at this point is most shonen anime *cough*Dragon Ball Z*cough* and Harry Potter.
((Let alone the fact that I don't have a badficcer persona yet this year. Anyways, that was... incredibly fun, actually. it's So Bad It's Awesome, and some parts were actually pure comedy gold.
Like “When Nanoha-chan wants something to happen, reality knows to step out of the way and let it happen”. Which gave me the hilarious image of a personification of reality raising their hands in surrender at Nanoha and saying "Do whatever you want, but don't blast me into smithereens"))
((CHeck the sharing settings?))
It saves us the trouble of having to read it.
11/10, excellent start to my morning.
And who are these Xeleppeon and Bluescreen people? Are they your OCs? Sorry if I asked an obvious question; I'm kinda sleep-deprived. *yawns*
Seriously, though, I hope Cornelius gets that vacation. (And that my character can cone, too :P)
It's an AU where people are sort of… swapped around and mixed up. Everyone's based on a PPC canon, u just have to fingure out who is who!
Good liuck, have fun!
And haS An intriguing story to tell. I cant wair to read more!
((Sorry, don’t have the time to flame the other writers individually.))
This is just like Void21194's fic! You can't do that! That's copying! You can't do that! Meanie!
((It's the Badfic Games. If there's badfic that does it, you can too, so I'd say you're golden.))
So crazy! So good! Love it, love it, love it! Keep going! And maybe give us some details on what Valon and Kala are doing, eh?
((... Fanficcer!Me, learn the art of taking your lust and shooting it in the face over and over and over until it's dead. I don't care if it's like a certain evil, white and pink, creepy cat we all know and hate and always comes back. Kill it anyways.))
PERFECT, 10/10 FOR GRACE AND ELEGANCE, WOULD BANG!
You're a villain! You're not allowed to save anybody! We all hate you! Bad! I'll make you go crazy! I'm spitting on paperwork right now, you hear? I'm chopping red tape into tiny bits! I'm... I'm calling you Notes.
That's right. The very nickname you hate the most. Notes. Notes. Notes, Notes, Notes, Notes, Notes, Notes, Notes. Perish.
((I'm sorry! But... well... characterization? Eh heh, eh heh, eh heh... Okay I'll leave now.))
shes not actually a villain shes just misdunertood stop eing meen!!
-BluEyedWonder
She's all mean and nasty and she insulted Kala and just left Rina out in the middle of HQ!
Remember the Folded Time interludes from the first Continuity Council story? We meet one of the Notary's previous regenerations there - Fourth, if memory serves - and she was pretty awesome, hanging around with that Lola bird who was clearly her girlfriend and off having Two-Fisted Galactic Adventure. If she can be like it once, she can be like it again.
Assuming, of course, that Scapegrace ever writes anything involving her again. Lazy little [EXTREMELY CENSORED]
And then she was nice, and then she turned mean again! And unless she regenerates again, she's gonna keep being mean! And don't insult Scapegrace! I like those stories!
((Oh, wow, it feels so weird to be saying 'Don't insult Scapegrace', given the circumstances.))
... To go on here. And I'm not saying that Scapegrace is a bad writer, merely a glacially slow one. We all complain about George R.R. Martin, don't we? =]
((It's fine. Many therapists have also told me not to insult myself, though since they require me to tell them the truth, well, there's a limit as to how not-insulting I can be. =] ))
That's so cool! I can't wait to see how she saves the PPC! :D
((OOC: Seriously, well done. I particularly enjoyed Acacia's "we need you to save OOC!"))
Wont say yet but itll be awesome!! ;)
((Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Funnily enough, "OOC" was actually an accident: what I generally do is type as fast as I can and leave all mistakes. I wasn't really trained in touch-typing so I get a fair few that way, "OOC" being one.))
-BluEyedWonder
but i thinku thatt it neds mor foccusss on boiled cabbage - ther simplyy wasnt enuf boiled cabbage 2 make this stor-e as perfct as itcould be.
TLDRDR: ad mor boilt cabbage.
iM not suer who its' abut thoguh? is itt Jaycacia? it srot of sounds' liek Jaycacia wiht the tees adn magick asn all. i mene Jaycacia'd mine byt its' ok yu cann borow here!
Is there going to be a part 2? You left a lot of stuff unexplained, but I like where (I think) this is going. *runs off to google the new words*
I deliberately opted to use no capitalization or punctuation marks aside from full stops in the piece to give a stream of consciousness feel to the narrative. As it stands, your ability to parse prose or style beyond a dogmatic adherence to standardized grammar is neither my fault or my problem. Mithras help you if you ever encounter Ulysses.
Checkmate.
Ignorance, after all, is your castle; and what an impenetrable fortress it is. For someone may tell you and tell you again of what is right, what is true, what the wits of mankind can achieve, and you content yourself with the sole fact you have internalised: that you are right, and everyone else is wrong. Whatever jewels are laid before you, you ignore, and treasure instead half-bricks and cobblestones as your Blue Hopes.
One is reminded of the old adage about playing a pigeon at chess.
Honestly, it's like trying to teach quantum physics to geese.
HONK HONK HONKY HONKA HONK HONK HONKA HONKY HONKA HONK HONKS HONKER HONK HURK HONK HONKA HONK
Did you have help?
Your an inspiration to us all— you keep doggedly fighting to be right when there is nothing to win.
I'm fighting to improve you in the vain and forlorn hope that there's a brain cell lost somewhere underneath the midden of sludge that calls itself, without evident irony, The Great Destroyer (or Destroyter if you prefer). You evidently care enough about what's going on here to comment on every fic that's gone up -- why not offer criticism that's actually useful, rather than the petty gruntings of a third-rate troll?
Whers Ronion?!
Dide you kidnipe her?!
Youu moanster!
((There's so much material to flame for the despicable little troll I'm writing. I hope that I don't actually hurt someone's feelings— but any fanfic forum needs a good flamer to rustle jimmies and be a nuisance so I'm filling the vacancy as best as I can.))
((*hugs you* your character is making my day!
--Key))
I clicked on this dreading a horror in the school of "Cloud Mows the Lawn," but thank god, it's only inane, and actually in a so-dumb-it's-funny kind of way. I'm not sure if that makes you a great troll or a terrible one.
Let's make no mistake, though, you're definitely a troll.
--Lemony
Tell us what happens! Show us what goes on in that mind of yours! I can't wait to see what the Marquis does to her. Winks.
Like, OH EMM GEE!! Finally a fik for my fav girl, LUXRUY!
shes so amazing i even chose a name like hers!1!
You should, like, totally make a NFWF version for teh lewd details! XDXD
Zero content. If your going to write a story, don't slap three sentnences together and expect you're readers to be happy with that,
losthopeforhumanity/10.
Get good, son.
*slow clap*
Or is that just me looking through a thesaurus trying to find what cool looks like?
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((This character is brilliantly observed.))
OMG I'm sorry I haven't reviewued ur story yat, I've been supoer bys w/school an stuff. :( But don't stop now bxus u r super gr8 and I need 2 know wat happens w/; Jaycacia and the Avatar!!! ILU!!!
XOXOX
I'm ever so grateful! The magickckck type was absolute genius! Please, please, I can't wait to see the end! More, more! Snickers intensify.
I totally want to see what happens next! And I want to know about this Avatar person! And I can't wait to read what happens at the end! Snickers.
i meen I tihnk Boromor is an argent in Teim Pheonicks, rihgt? But I tihnk you wrote Dotcor Fizzgerald wron a bit.
Aslo tehre arent' any palivios in HQ. I sotped reading tehre.
Can you put in more? Ooh! Do Tortall! Do Valdemar! Do Harry Potter! Do everything! Make this even more awesome!
This si the first thing you should do. Then, unplug you're computer, disassemble the side panel, locate your hard drive, and destroy it. Is is the only way to make sure this literary plague doesn't spread to the rest of the planet.
You're borrowed characters are flatter than paper, your prose is drier than the soil of Mars, and its a miracle I haven't died of sheer boredom while reading your pitiful offering.
2/100. Only yhe appearance of Doctor McNinja is somewhat redeeming this story.
Ill giv anyone a interwebz if they write a Jaycacia/Zeb fic
[Wonders at the horrific implications]
Or do you just sit around and demand free entertainment all the time?
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((I am so sorry))
*Cue Primal Reversion SFX, the greek letter Xi appears instead of Alpha or Omega*
He's reverted to his mattman14 Form!
'Primal Reversion' is the most perfect name for the Badfic Games I've seen so far.
((I may need to rewrite the third part of the Department of Inaccuracies Trilogy into goodfic so that it can be archived in my upcoming spin-off. This, of course, means that the department will need to be made canonical. If agents wearing Octagonal Snowflake badges appear in the PPC, it’s your fault!
HG))
I can probably archive the Inaccuracies story as a one-off (as I'll also be doing with Jaycacia, for the same reason); I just don't have the energy/time to do everything, because it takes /so long/.
hS
Although it may not help to avoid the Octagonal Snowflakes, at least I would not feel like I must ask for Permission to create a new department before the "example mission" drops off the Board. This would give me more time to think about an alternative Flash Patch that is as hilariously unrelated as the Potted Cactus or the Three-Eyed Rubber Duck.
HG
He's a better person than you'll ever be! He's awesome! He's perfect! You won't get away with this! I'll do such terrible things to your precious Aviator that you'll think I was Iximaz herself!
NOT THAT! ANYTHING BUT THAT!
((Oh, wow, now I kind of want to see that, just to revel in its awful glory. Look what you've done, 'Ronion'. Are you happy? Is this what you intended to cause?))
I love dis storie and look forward to more! Zeb mustlose all innocence and your the one to make it happin!
((GMA here, I decided to become something worse than my previous incarnation.))
((Is ROFLing still a thing, or am I being a crazy grandmother right now? But wow, this was hilarious! Absolutely lovely, truly lovely. Oh, right, there's also part where I'm supposed to respond to this in character. Ahem.))
NNNOOO!!! Zeb is too good for her! She's a horrible person! She's evil, and he's not! Go away, bad shipping! Shoo! Shoo! The Aviator's off my list now. Now, I'm gunning for the Notary! I WILL DESTROY HER! SHE WILL FEEL AGONY FOR ALL OF TIME!!!
((Dun dun dun! In all reality, I doubt I can trump what I just read. Pardon me while I go read Gunnerkrigg Court, it looks fascinating.))
butt Zed shud totlly hav deaten teh Darloks bedus he is ECLECTIC POWRD so he can soot tehm with ECLISITY. u cat juts ignoe him becs yo down't lick hin.
Avie-senpai is so smexy *lercherous eyes* uwu I hope you finish the story cause I want more!! Your writing is really good I could really picture the surroundings. I dont watch Doctor Who but the Davos guy seems super cool, you did a good job describing him!!
((Meet an exaggerated version of Middle School!Key, who thought she knew what good writing was, and how to give concrit. . . Please note that the real me has never called anyone "senpai."))
Wow so many people don't even know that country exists. It was a little surprising reading that.
My suggestion is to just roll with it and laugh at our badfic author alter-egos.
Actually, it was left alone because they supported and sheltered people persecuted for... wanting Italy's unification.
Giuseppe Garibaldi allowed them to stay as their own nation out of sheer gratitude.
Tl,dr: San Marino remained independent because they supported the unification.
Something like that can work only here in Italy.
When they say truth is stranger than fiction... you couldn't get away with writing that.
hS
This was absolutely hilarious! Totally awesome! Please, more, more! Though why are Nume and Ilraen always shipped together? They know other guys, you know.
ddi you right taht snog all bi yurself?!?!?!?
.........Bloodt hilarrious, keep up the gooed work
[[*Whole hearted, subconsciousness clapping*]]
I luved this soooo much! They're, like, so cute together! Please, more, more! I want 500 words per chapter! No, wait, 1000! No, 5000! Yeah, that's enough!
Most people would consider this a single moment in a scene but you're dead imagination decided to package a trivial conversation as an entire chapter.
Furthermore, your cahracterization is so flat that construction workers are using it as a level balance.
Dreadful effort. 0.2/10, learn to write.
Its like you watched a low quality romance series before writing this abomination. While grammmatically correct, your filling these chapters with so much clichays that it becomes horrendously impossible to read. It's all déja-vue and bland and overall gross.
You're time is wated on this site. Go outside and do something productive instead.
yawn/10. Next.
taht is petty cute! hav yu got ane hatters yet whu say yu sohuldnt' mack Supernumberary and Illian gay?! becuse if yoi do TEHYR'E WRON.
I totes can't wait to see more!
its son cute! i want more1
[[I'm just gonna sit around in this hellscape of my primaly reverted brain until my agents come around]]
I abosolutely love this so far keep uup the godo work1
[[Protesting screams are heard subconsciously by everyone, they elect to ignore it]]
OMG I just looove what youve done here
Im just so glad that somone else sees the Nume/Ilrean pairing and i can't wait to see what you come up with! Keep it up!!!
And I am so, so very sorry for how immature I've been in years passed. Now I'm going to write MATURE Nume/Ilrean slashfics for ALL YOUR ENJOYMENT! :DDDDD