Subject: 113 words of uselessness.
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Posted on: 2016-09-22 04:08:00 UTC

Most people would consider this a single moment in a scene but you're dead imagination decided to package a trivial conversation as an entire chapter.

Furthermore, your cahracterization is so flat that construction workers are using it as a level balance.


Dreadful effort. 0.2/10, learn to write.

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